Your flow is average.
Get rid of the doubles.
Work on the flow.
Lyrics average too.
If average is you're goal, then you've achieved it.
Beat name?
Your flow is average.
Get rid of the doubles.
Work on the flow.
Lyrics average too.
If average is you're goal, then you've achieved it.
Beat name?
I like your voice, compliments the beat really well. Putting the flow a tiny bit more with the beat would be something to improve on, but this is pretty spot on! I dig.
Decent lyrics, good content and story. IMO you need to have a much more complicated delivery however, it's too simple and boring, and you need a better rhyme scheme. Nice chorus. Pretty good overall.
Diggin the flow. Beat is perfect. Awesome!
Turn the vocals down a bit and this will be much better!!
good work!
Rapper is ok. Not bad, not great. Beat needs a lot of work. It either is really bad or just doesn't compliment this dude's rapping.
Errr... why is this score so low? IMO - Damn, you really mowed this one down! I love it.
Feat. bizzy bone right? Most hi-profile collab we got on NG prob right here. Love it!
Hmm... Ereez is back?
indeed i am :)
I like it a lot. but i actually felt that it got way too repetitive. simply put, first time hearing it, I got a big headache by the time 1:40 or so came around. But it's a nice start I guess. Good work!
Its really supposed to be repetitive. Its made for vocals, and the sample lends itself to stand alone. IMO anyways.
Producer influences: Dr Dre, Just Blaze, Bangladesh, Kanye West, Swiss Beatz. Rap Influences: J cole, Eminem, Tupac, Yelawolf, Tech N9ne. I produce and record vocals using the best program of them all, classic Garageband.
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Joined on 7/17/10