I don't know why
But Ses your voice has always been weird - ur good but I can't stand ur voice, I feel like a lot of it is because of the effects on your voice cuz its like your whispering, or either its just ur rap voice or just simply your voice.
Regardless...
Chrysis, sick as always.
Oh, and whats the instrumental to this?
a little simple
add a little to it and this would be amazin! 5/5 man
Thank you, I know I'm not very good at this but the encouragement helps!
alright
your flow was good at times, and staggered at other times. work on consistency and staying on beat and it'll sound a lot better.
as for your lyrics, thats a whole nother story. they're lil b worthy - take it how you want.
Much better... awesome work!
I dig this a ton.
Yeah! Thanks AK. Perfect example of how feedback can help. Glad u liked it
Needs a little bit of work
1. You gotta work on the drums. You need a better pattern and a much, much louder volume.
2. Also, the coin sounds was too repetitive and irritating.
3. I felt there was too much random Mario sounds at times.
4. I think if you got rid of the mario sounds, this would be a billion times better. I like the background bass and the lead synths a lot.
Yeah..
but i think reduce the coin volume would be better :P
Its irritating cause its too loud and it cuts my beat :P
But you have to agree that its a good melody!
Great job!
NIce flow, nice hook, nice beat. A bunch of those rhymes sounds very forced, that's my only criticism, which hurts your content. But I dig it overall
Only a 4.1 score?
This needs some attention. Seriously good work here.
10/10
5/5
4.17 / 5.00 (+ 0.077)
dl'd
10/10
Sick job! I saw that you were asking vocals in an earlier submission for this track, simply out of curiousity, where did you end up finding "Ill V"? NG or elsewhere? She did a great job wtih the hook!
I got hooked up with her from a person I'm doing another track with. She did a good job. I'm really happy with the track.
Sail - AWOLNATION
1. please give credit to the creators of the original song, u need to start doing that. this is "sail" by awolnation
2. what did i just listen to? u talk in a funny voice over a great beat that u didnt give credit to? u got no flow in this man except for slurrin particular words. lyrics are pretty weak too, work on them. it sounds like ur tryna be weezy, and its failing greatly here.
work on it and lets see wut u got goin forward
appreciate the comment, and yes we no awolnaton met them plenty of times 2 be exact, sorry one of the uploaders that mixed this track didnt include it , we will fix that, and this is jus a remix of a lil acapella with the beat so it wasnt an intended song, just a catchy mix all in all thanx:D god bless
Producer influences: Dr Dre, Just Blaze, Bangladesh, Kanye West, Swiss Beatz. Rap Influences: J cole, Eminem, Tupac, Yelawolf, Tech N9ne. I produce and record vocals using the best program of them all, classic Garageband.
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