Klazik is the close winner in a mediocre battle
Its ok i guess. Wyze had a better flow on this, but one of klaziks last few lines made the deciding factor that i was thinkin about the entire time: "your rhymes are all cheesy" = very true Wyze sorry
Klazik is the close winner in a mediocre battle
Its ok i guess. Wyze had a better flow on this, but one of klaziks last few lines made the deciding factor that i was thinkin about the entire time: "your rhymes are all cheesy" = very true Wyze sorry
Word AK-49.
Love it
But ya gotta change up those drums. I feel like you're using the hip hop kit in Garageband lol
Ew.......
Grossly good... too good...
5/5
10/10
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No criticism here.
Haha awesome thanks so much!
Alright
MSB has better beats around, imo. This is an average beat, and definitely subpar for MSB. The beat is not great with your voice or flow either, I don't feel like your flowin with the beat. This is the 2nd track I've heard and you could definitely use some better beat selection but you got lots o potential man.
Thanks AK. I listened to some of your beats, theyre awesome. :) Appreciate the helpful words. I'll try to keep them in mind next time i choose an instrumental.
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Good rhymes
Some of those lyrics are really corny tho... could definitely use some work but nice flow and rhymes. You'd also sound better on a better beat as well, imo.
Haha Thanks AK. Didn't spend much time writing this one. :)
If you wanna recommend some beats for me, that would be sweet. PM me!
awesome production
Production is the best part here, overall great job
haha thanks man
Overall its good
I see a little Tech mixed with Eminem in there in some lines, and then a lil amateur wanna be in other lines. Some lines your just off beat - theres a few too many syllables and it doesnt flow with the beat. Ah ,yes the beat - that needs to be louder: because its so quiet, I feel like I'm just listenin to you talkin at a fast pace for 3+ min without any instruments. Lower your vocals and bump that beat. So that's pretty much mastering. Your a decent rapper, some lines are great and remind me of a Tech or Em, but you gotta seek it in the midst of all the blabber that can be off beat. Overall, a decent song, I see lots of potential - 9/10 and 5/5
What is this?
This is pretty bad.
Thank you for your informative and very detailed review. I'll be sure to improve in the future based on your valuable feedback.
awesome
I need the instrumental to this though.
Good and then... wut?
Started off good, I dig the rave-like bass line, but what's with that lead, higher pitched synth... ruins it and makes it sound cheesy and... well... poopy. I'd do somethin else with that bass loop.
Producer influences: Dr Dre, Just Blaze, Bangladesh, Kanye West, Swiss Beatz. Rap Influences: J cole, Eminem, Tupac, Yelawolf, Tech N9ne. I produce and record vocals using the best program of them all, classic Garageband.
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